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Short Stories and Writings

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Michelle Krys

WhyNotJustSayIt

irby + ian.

About me

Introduction	Hello, thank you for coming. The purpose of this blog is to showcase some of the writing I have been doing with the hope of obtaining some critical feedback. Yes, I want your criticism, I NEED it! Please leave more then, "I liked it" or "That sucked". Tell me what you liked or more importantly, what you didn't like it and WHY. Do I remain true to the style of the story? Does the dialogue stink? Did it fail to stir anything from you except a yawn? The work here I plan to attempt to get published so any feedback helps. I will take any help I can get, so if any of you want to help out with editing or content ideas let me know and I can send you a copy of the Word documents. You can reach me at the email address on the bottom. Thank you so much for coming! falloutmule@yahoo.com

Introduction

Hello, thank you for coming. The purpose of this blog is to showcase some of the writing I have been doing with the hope of obtaining some critical feedback. Yes, I want your criticism, I NEED it! Please leave more then, "I liked it" or "That sucked". Tell me what you liked or more importantly, what you didn't like it and WHY. Do I remain true to the style of the story? Does the dialogue stink? Did it fail to stir anything from you except a yawn? The work here I plan to attempt to get published so any feedback helps. I will take any help I can get, so if any of you want to help out with editing or content ideas let me know and I can send you a copy of the Word documents. You can reach me at the email address on the bottom. Thank you so much for coming! falloutmule@yahoo.com