I specially like that last verse ~ Well played to the musical challenge ~
June 22, 2013 at 5:26 PM
You are deeper than I dare to look.
June 22, 2013 at 5:58 PM
Sadly, we won't get the answers to your questions.
June 22, 2013 at 8:52 PM
WOW! This poem is smokin'! Especially notable is the "butterfly scream". Great write!
June 22, 2013 at 9:20 PM
A lovely, thought provoking piece.
June 22, 2013 at 9:57 PM
Wonderful job, Gail. ♥
June 22, 2013 at 10:04 PM
The butterfly scream got me too. Powerful writing about his life and song(s).
June 22, 2013 at 10:20 PM
You really took the challenge and ran with it. I love how this asks so many questions we will never be able to answer. Perhaps it should inspire us to seek answers to our own questions of self. Thank you so much for participating!!
June 23, 2013 at 12:16 AM
What a loss that was. A sad story.You did a great job with this challenge.=)
June 23, 2013 at 2:36 AM
Who knows what it's like at the end? Hopefully it's peaceful. I've thought about it a lot since my dad's passing from prostate cancer.
June 23, 2013 at 3:44 AM
when the music is over I will be listening to the angels sing in heaven.
June 23, 2013 at 5:46 AM
Very powerful and thought provoking. Did something in particular inspire it?Lynne x
June 23, 2013 at 6:51 AM
What an excellent tribute to a sad but talented life. The rhythm of this piece has a good feel to it.
June 23, 2013 at 5:45 PM
Pow! Those last two lines are amazing!
June 24, 2013 at 12:05 AM
Deeply satisfying ... deeply questioning.
June 24, 2013 at 11:12 AM
posted by Gail at 6:00 PM on Jun 22, 2013
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Close this window Jump to comment formI specially like that last verse ~ Well played to the musical challenge ~
June 22, 2013 at 5:26 PM
You are deeper than I dare to look.
June 22, 2013 at 5:58 PM
Sadly, we won't get the answers to your questions.
June 22, 2013 at 8:52 PM
WOW! This poem is smokin'! Especially notable is the "butterfly scream". Great write!
June 22, 2013 at 9:20 PM
A lovely, thought provoking piece.
June 22, 2013 at 9:57 PM
Wonderful job, Gail. ♥
June 22, 2013 at 10:04 PM
The butterfly scream got me too. Powerful writing about his life and song(s).
June 22, 2013 at 10:20 PM
You really took the challenge and ran with it. I love how this asks so many questions we will never be able to answer. Perhaps it should inspire us to seek answers to our own questions of self. Thank you so much for participating!!
June 23, 2013 at 12:16 AM
What a loss that was. A sad story.
You did a great job with this challenge.
=)
June 23, 2013 at 2:36 AM
Who knows what it's like at the end? Hopefully it's peaceful. I've thought about it a lot since my dad's passing from prostate cancer.
June 23, 2013 at 3:44 AM
when the music is over I will be listening to the angels sing in heaven.
June 23, 2013 at 5:46 AM
Very powerful and thought provoking. Did something in particular inspire it?
Lynne x
June 23, 2013 at 6:51 AM
What an excellent tribute to a sad but talented life. The rhythm of this piece has a good feel to it.
June 23, 2013 at 5:45 PM
Pow! Those last two lines are amazing!
June 24, 2013 at 12:05 AM
Deeply satisfying ... deeply questioning.
June 24, 2013 at 11:12 AM