You're the artist, but my brain at least wants to have the CAT characteristics on one side and the PACK ones on the other. It looks possible, but you'd have to let the A in CAT be Appeal rather than Agility, and I don't know if the ordering matters on some level.
On the "What's Demon City" page, the first paragraph on the right hand side may work better spaced apart, descending down the page like in a poem or a list. I feel like the explanation proper starts in the paragraph beneath it, with the above serving as a sort of preamble. I think, if you wanted to, you could distinguish the first paragraph in italics, so it's read in that kind of 'quote' voice, if you know what I mean, if not the list. Obviously, just a suggestion, and I'm loving the design as a whole.
@Zak The obvious way to read it to me is as two columns, I think in part because CATPACK itself is a column, in part because the CATPACK column creates a bigger left to right gap than there is top to bottom, and in part because the blurbs aren't all the same height - the top of Perception is higher than the top of Toughness, but T comes before P in the acronym.
It does occur to me that I'm looking at this on a laptop screen instead of a page, which might also be influencing the way intuitively interact with it, but I can't yet say for certain.
Tarot is a bit hard to read for white-on-light colors. I get the neon colors being important thematically, but I think if there are some tricks to make reading easier it would be nice.
February 18, 2018 at 10:22 AM
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"Demon City Preview With Sexy Sexy Layouts"
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You're the artist, but my brain at least wants to have the CAT characteristics on one side and the PACK ones on the other. It looks possible, but you'd have to let the A in CAT be Appeal rather than Agility, and I don't know if the ordering matters on some level.
February 16, 2018 at 2:18 AM
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The order's not important but could you expand a little on why you think that would be a good idea?
February 16, 2018 at 3:18 AM
On the "What's Demon City" page, the first paragraph on the right hand side may work better spaced apart, descending down the page like in a poem or a list. I feel like the explanation proper starts in the paragraph beneath it, with the above serving as a sort of preamble. I think, if you wanted to, you could distinguish the first paragraph in italics, so it's read in that kind of 'quote' voice, if you know what I mean, if not the list. Obviously, just a suggestion, and I'm loving the design as a whole.
February 16, 2018 at 7:12 AM
I am pretty hyped for this game.
February 16, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Any idea on when it'll officially release?
February 16, 2018 at 11:10 AM
that is hella sexy
February 16, 2018 at 11:28 AM
@Zak The obvious way to read it to me is as two columns, I think in part because CATPACK itself is a column, in part because the CATPACK column creates a bigger left to right gap than there is top to bottom, and in part because the blurbs aren't all the same height - the top of Perception is higher than the top of Toughness, but T comes before P in the acronym.
It does occur to me that I'm looking at this on a laptop screen instead of a page, which might also be influencing the way intuitively interact with it, but I can't yet say for certain.
February 17, 2018 at 7:30 AM
Tarot is a bit hard to read for white-on-light colors. I get the neon colors being important thematically, but I think if there are some tricks to make reading easier it would be nice.
February 18, 2018 at 10:22 AM