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"Dawn of the Dead"

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Blogger HandsomeStan said...

Wow, another shout-out! I better get crackin' on some reviews this year. Thanks, Shark!

As far as the misplaced modifier, which paragraph were you referring to? The first or second?

In the first, it might be, "Later, in the mall, I definitely remembered..." where it's the movie that's "in the mall," not you physically. Or it could be "Even when I started it last night, I still half-thought..." where the subject is the movie, not you.

In the second paragraph, I suppose it could be "Both are worth checking out, especially the comments section..." Um, maybe something about how "Both" reviews are the plural subject, but the latter subject is singular?

I used to know all this stuff. Now I cheerfully ignore it. But I love a good grammar challenge!

October 11, 2010 11:34 AM

Blogger Landshark said...

Ha. Yeah, the mall one was the one I intended. The 2nd one I think is fine. And yes, that should be "comment sections" to match the "both."

Nice work!

October 11, 2010 11:50 AM

Blogger Catfreeek said...

Glad you enjoyed this Landshark. It's hard to believe there was anyone left on this blog who hadn't seen it. Great review and yeah you are totally the cool professor!

October 11, 2010 3:27 PM

Blogger 50PageMcGee said...

i was inspired to go back and watch the first few minutes of this on youtube. everythings just so hopeless. nobody even seems surprised by any of it anymore, just depressed.

October 12, 2010 4:10 AM

Blogger DKC said...

I haven't seen this in so long. This makes me want to watch it again. Although I would ask people to ignore the many grammatical mistakes that are sure to be in my review!

October 12, 2010 7:20 AM

Blogger Whirlygirl said...

Don't feel so bad, Landshark. I just finally saw this for the first time two years ago.

October 12, 2010 7:41 AM

Blogger Octopunk said...

I also appreciate the shout out. Shout!

I'm kind of amazed we lived in the same house as long as we did and you never managed to see this.

October 12, 2010 8:35 PM

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